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They found her hidden
away under the she-oaks,
a fae-child waiting
for her new nurturers.

Gluey with sap and
pine-needles, her hair
was nothing so much as
a tribute to glorious disorder;

entrancing her discoverers
though the eye followed no
line but the crusted,
sandy slit on her cheek.

When they opened her mouth
a drop of umber leaked from
this tribal endowerment,
a grotesque tattoo of womanhood.

Under her tongue,
a pomegranate seed -
the flesh of her tongue
like Hades' enticement.

And as they inspected and
prodded, they found inside her
the seed of another though
for a score she had lain fallow.

Men say it is their right
to plow the earth's fields as
they please, but they may
own not copse nor briar.
This is a creative assignment that I wrote about 3 or 4 years ago, for a literature unit on William Blake. We primarily studied his bog-person writings, which is a lot of his earlier stuff.

I found this draft sheet in my room while I was cleaning it. No doubt I edited it and stuff, but I don't think I got back the edited copy and I can't find it in any of my folders on the computers. Ah well. The inspiration came from an episode of either CSI or NCIS, as well as Blake's writing. Eh. Naturalism.
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Pretty cool, kiddo.